Question #N1112
The group of students met with the professor to discuss the assignment. They discussed the requirements and the deadlines, and then they asked for clarification on a particular point. Which choice best revises the underlined portion to improve the clarity and conciseness of the sentence?
Which choice best revises the underlined portion to improve the clarity and conciseness of the sentence?
A. They discussed the requirements, the deadlines, and then they asked for clarification on a particular point.
B. They discussed the requirements and deadlines, and then they asked for clarification on a particular point.
C. They discussed the requirements, deadlines, and then asked for clarification on a particular point.
D. They discussed the requirements and the deadlines, and then asked for clarification on a particular point.
Correct Answer is: C
Choice C is the best option because it is the most concise and clear. Removing the unnecessary words "they" creates a more direct and efficient sentence.