Question #N123
The first time I saw the film, I was immediately impressed by its unique style. The film's director, a master of cinematic suspense, uses a variety of techniques to keep the audience on the edge of their seat. The film is sure to be a hit, and its popularity is already growing. Although critics are divided about the film's message, audiences are united in their praise. Which of the following choices would make the passage more cohesive?
Which of the following changes to the sentence *Although critics are divided about the film’s message, audiences are united in their praise* would make the paragraph more cohesive?
A. Although critics are divided about the film’s message, audiences are united in their praise.
B. Despite the mixed critical reception of the film’s message, audiences are united in their praise.
C. Although critics are divided about the film’s message, audiences are united in their praise, and it is clear that the film has struck a chord with viewers.
D. Critics are divided about the film’s message, audiences are united in their praise, and the film is sure to be a hit, with its popularity already growing.
Correct Answer is: B
Choice B provides a smoother transition between the two sentences, while maintaining the original meaning. The phrase "Despite the mixed critical reception" directly addresses the conflicting views mentioned in the previous sentence, creating a more logical flow.