Question #N1317
In an attempt to make the text flow more smoothly, the author of this passage might consider rephrasing the sentence "A series of *events* happened that could be considered a turning point in the development of the genre." Which choice best accomplishes this goal while maintaining the meaning of the original sentence?
Which choice best rephrases the sentence above while maintaining the meaning?
A. A turning point in the development of the genre was marked by a series of events.
B. A series of events, which could be considered a turning point in the development of the genre, happened.
C. The genre was developed in a series of events that marked a turning point.
D. A turning point in the development of the genre happened in a series of events.
Correct Answer is: A
Choice A is the best answer because it rephrases the sentence to create a more concise and direct statement. The original sentence uses a somewhat awkward structure, with the phrase "could be considered a turning point" interrupting the flow of the sentence. Choice A eliminates this interruption and makes the sentence more clear and direct. Choices B, C, and D do not improve upon the original sentence’s structure and flow.