Question #N239
The company’s new mission statement, *to empower our employees to achieve their full potential and become the best versions of themselves*, is a powerful declaration. The statement reflects a shift in the company's philosophy, and it's likely to have a profound effect on the company's culture and operations.
Which choice best revises the underlined portion to create a more concise and grammatically correct sentence?Correct Answer is: B
Choice B is the best revision because it removes the unnecessary repetition of "to" and uses a more concise and grammatically correct structure. The original sentence is grammatically correct, but it is wordy and could be more concise. Choice A does not change the sentence. Choice C is incorrect because it uses a comma splice; the comma does not link two complete thoughts. Choice D is incorrect because it uses a comma and then a participial phrase, making the sentence unnecessarily long and awkward.