Question #N380
The following is a paragraph adapted from a short story. While the sentence is grammatically correct, it may not be the most effective way to present the information. The writer is trying to convey that the character has learned to adapt to the difficult circumstances he faces. Which choice best improves the sentence by providing a more precise and effective use of language? *The farmer had to learn to adapt to the harsh conditions of the land, he worked long hours and endured the heat and cold. *
Which choice provides the most effective and precise use of language?Correct Answer is: C
Choice C combines the two independent clauses into one grammatically correct sentence that flows more smoothly and effectively conveys the idea that the farmer had to learn to adapt to the harsh conditions of the land. It also avoids unnecessary repetition of the phrase "he had to learn to adapt." Choice A is incorrect because the nonrestrictive clause creates a pause in the flow of the sentence. Choice B is incorrect because the conjunction "but" creates a sense of contrast that doesn’t fit the intended meaning of the sentence. Choice D is incorrect because the conjunction "because" incorrectly implies that the farmer worked long hours and endured the heat and cold as a result of having to adapt to the harsh conditions of the land.