Question #N405
The novel's depiction of the protagonist's internal struggle is a testament to the author's talent. After a series of events that test the protagonist's resilience, the reader is left to ponder the character's inner strength. What is the main point of the novel?
Which choice is the most effective way to revise the underlined portion of the passage to maintain the tone and style?
A. After a series of events that test the protagonist’s resilience, the reader is left to ponder the character’s inner strength.
B. After a series of events that test the protagonist’s resilience, the reader ponders the character’s inner strength.
C. The protagonist’s resilience is tested by a series of events, the reader is left to ponder the character’s inner strength.
D. The protagonist’s resilience is tested by a series of events, the reader ponders the character’s inner strength.
Correct Answer is: A
Choice A is the most effective way to revise the underlined portion because it maintains the tone and style of the passage. The original sentence is grammatically correct, but it is not as concise as choice A. Choices B and C are incorrect because they change the meaning of the sentence. Choice D is incorrect because it creates a run-on sentence.