Question #N449

The poet Maya Angelou was known for her vivid imagery, her powerful voice, and her ability to evoke emotion. She received numerous awards and recognitions for her work including the National Medal of Arts and the Presidential Medal of Freedom. Angelou was also a celebrated author, singer, dancer, and actress. Angelou's work continues to inspire people around the world.

Which choice best combines the sentences at the underlined portion to maintain the style and tone of the passage?
A. She received numerous awards and recognitions, including the National Medal of Arts and the Presidential Medal of Freedom, for her work.
B. She received numerous awards and recognitions for her work; she was awarded the National Medal of Arts and the Presidential Medal of Freedom.
C. She received numerous awards and recognitions, for her work, including the National Medal of Arts and the Presidential Medal of Freedom.
D. Angelou received numerous awards and recognitions, the National Medal of Arts and the Presidential Medal of Freedom, for her work.

Correct Answer is: A

Choice A is the best option because it uses a comma and the word "including" to smoothly combine the two sentences. The use of a comma and "including" maintains the flow and tone of the passage, and the placement of the phrase "including the National Medal of Arts and the Presidential Medal of Freedom" is clear and concise. The other choices create either awkward constructions or inappropriate punctuation.