Question #N898
The main character of the novel, named William, is a young man who has recently moved to a new town. He is trying to adjust to his new surroundings, but he feels out of place. William is quiet and shy, and he often keeps to himself. He is also very sensitive, and he is easily hurt by others’ words and actions. However, William is also very intelligent and creative, and he has a passion for art. He finds solace in painting and drawing, and he often uses his art to express his feelings and emotions.
Which choice best combines the sentences at the end of this passage into one sentence that is grammatically correct and avoids redundancy?
A. He finds solace in painting and drawing, and he often uses his art to express his feelings and emotions.
B. He finds solace in painting and drawing, often using his art to express his feelings and emotions.
C. He often uses his art, painting and drawing, to express his feelings and emotions, finding solace in this activity.
D. William often uses his art, painting and drawing, to express his feelings and emotions, finding solace in this activity.
Correct Answer is: B
Choice B combines the sentences most effectively because it avoids redundancy by using the phrase "often using his art" in place of repeating "painting and drawing." It also maintains a clear and concise sentence structure.